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2019-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. He was a bit skinny when he was younger, but he lost a lot of weight. 2. She has three tattoos 3. Jordan is pretty fit. He goes to the gym three times a week. 4. Robert’s sister is gorgeous. 5. She’s rather plain-looking, but a lot of boys like her. 6. Rick’s hair is always unkempt. 7. Peter started working out three months ago, and he’s already ripped. 8. Her freckles make her look younger than she is. 9. My grandmother’s face is rather wrinkled. 10. He’s never tanned. In fact, he always looks very pale.

강사 첨삭

Hello Eun Young!!

Thank you for your homework!!!

I am very happy that you are eager to learn a lot of things and you want to know which field you need to practice more. It is a good thing and it means that you are interested in learning a lot of things. I commend you for that.
T. Jeny

1. He was a bit skinny when he was younger, but he lost a lot of weight.
>> He was a bit chubby when he was younger, but he lost a lot of weight.
2. She has three tattoos
>>correct
3. Jordan is pretty fit. He goes to the gym three times a week.
>>correct
4. Robert’s sister is gorgeous.
>>correct
5. She’s rather plain-looking, but a lot of boys like her.
>>correct
6. Rick’s hair is always unkempt.
>>correct
7. Peter started working out three months ago, and he’s already ripped.
>>correct
8. Her freckles make her look younger than she is.
>>correct
9. My grandmother’s face is rather wrinkled.
>>correct
10. He’s never tanned. In fact, he always looks very pale.

>>correct

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