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2019-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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Q. If time travel were possible, which period of world history would you like to return to? Why? If I could go back to the past, I would go back to 1910. Because Japan invaded Korea in 1910. Korea suffered so much from Japan\'s invasion, and it still has many negative effects on Korean society. I want to go back in 1910 and do something to stop Japan\'s invasion. Of course, I’ll have to take advanced weapons. Personally, I want to go back to high school days. A man’s life is affected by his high school days. If I had done harder something in high school, I would have made my life more successful. But, I think it is most important to live the present as best as possible.

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If I could go back to the past, I would go back to 1910.

>>If I could go back in the past, I would go back to 1910.
Because Japan invaded Korea in 1910.

>>It\'s because Japan invaded Korea in 1910.

>>If I could go back in the past, I would go back in the year 1910 which was the time when Japan invaded Korea.
Korea suffered so much from Japan\'s invasion, and it still has many negative effects on Korean society.

>>CORRECT!
I want to go back in 1910 and do something to stop Japan\'s invasion.

>>CORRECT!
Of course, I’ll have to take advanced weapons.

>>CORRECT!
Personally, I want to go back to high school days.

>>Personally, I want to go back in my high school days.
 A man’s life is affected by his high school days.

>> A man’s life is highly affected by his high school days.
If I had done harder something in high school, I would have made my life more successful.

>>If I had done better in high school, I would have made my life more successful.
 But, I think it is most important to live the present as best as possible.

>>CORRECT!

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