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What are the disadvantages of talking over the phone?
The disadvantage of talking over the phone is that a mistake of words is delivered without any filtering. That\'s why peoples can upset each other while talking over the phone. On the other hand, letter is happened less than phone. Because we can review letter before we send it to others. By doing so, we can reduce our mistakes.
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What are the disadvantages of talking over the phone?
The disadvantage of talking over the phone is that a mistake of words is delivered without any filtering.
The disadvantage of talking over the phone is that a mistake of words is delivered without any filtering.
>>> One of the disadvantage of talking over the phone is that the words uttered will be delivered without being filtered like when we write the message.
OR: One of the disadvantage of talking over the phone is that the message will be delivered without filters like when we write the message.
That\'s why peoples can upset each other while talking over the phone.
>>> That is why people can make each other upset while talking over the phone.
On the other hand, letter is happened less than phone.
>>> On the other hand, writing a letter becomes less popular than talking on the phone.
Because we can review letter before we send it to others.
>>> We can check our letters before we send it to others.
By doing so, we can reduce our mistakes.
>>> By doing so, we can reduce creating mistakes.
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