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2019-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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HOMEWORK: Who communicates better: men or women? I think that It is different what choose the topic or what they interested in. Some story can be more communicated than men doing or women doing. This is my personal opinion about standard of communication. I think that men is more better which their action, Otherwise, women is more better their speech skills than man. I saw some of sentences watching movies, that described \"when it comes really important thing, women is too emotional\" However, That is not everyone, Probably, we have to enough communication with everyone.

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I think that It is different what choose the topic or what they interested in.

>>I think that it is different on what topic we choose or what they are interested in.

Some story can be more communicated than men doing or women doing.

>> Some stories can be shared between men and women.

This is my personal opinion about standard of communication.

>>This is my personal opinion about the standards of communication.

I think that men is more better which their action, Otherwise, women is more better their speech skills than man.

>>I think that men is better in their actions, in the other side, women are better in their speaking skills than man.

I saw some of sentences watching movies, that described \"when it comes really important thing, women is too emotional\"

>>I saw some of the sentences watching movies, that described \"when it comes to the really important thing, women are too emotional\"

However, That is not everyone, Probably, we have to enough communication with everyone.

>>However, this is not for everyone, probably, we have to have enough communication with everyone.

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