Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
It\'s good to hear that you were fine at that kind of experience. Well, accident is so inevitable. I experienced it many times riding big bikes. Fortunately, I\'m still alive and so are you with your experience. See you later. :)
~Teacher Lucy
Someone bumped into my car that was stuck in the traffic light.
>>CORRECT!
>>As I was stuck in the traffic, someone bumped into my car.
I wasn\'t seriously hurt.
>>CORRECT!
>>Luckily, I wasn\'t injured.
I couldn\'t use the car while it was being repaired.
>>CORRECT!
>>It was being repaired so I couldn\'t use it.
Drivers and pedestrians will follow traffic rules to reduce the number of accidents.
>>Drivers will follow traffic rules and pedestrian etiquette to reduce numbers of accidents.
Drivers should not drink and drive, nor should they doze off while driving.
>>CORRECT!
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