Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
It was when I was 20 years old. I was watching a movie in my frined house at 3am. Suddenly, The window right infont of me was opened.
and i saw a someone\'s hand. It was very frightening because that person was likely to come inside house through window. So, I woke my friens up and called police. What if i didn\'t go to my friend house. He would not exist in this world. He is very thankful for me. It was just as well that i was watching the movie there. These days, My fried and I laugh with that experience. But, At that time. It was super frightening.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jay! I am glad that you were safe and with your friend. Those are good memories that make you a brave person.
Until the next one! ^-^
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
OR>>It was when I was about 20 years old.
I was watching a movie in my frined house at 3am.
>>I was watching a movie in my friend\'s house at 3 a.m.
Suddenly, The window right infont of me was opened. and i saw a someone\'s hand.
>>Suddenly, the window right in front of me was opened, and I saw someone\'s hand.
It was very frightening because that person was likely to come inside house through window.
>>It was very frightening because that person was likely to come inside the house through the window.
So, I woke my friens up and called police.
>>So, I woke my friend up and called the police.
What if i didn\'t go to my friend house.
>>What if I didn\'t go to my friend\'s house?
He would not exist in this world.
>>CORRECT
OR>>He would not be existing in this world.
He is very thankful for me.
>>CORRECT
It was just as well that i was watching the movie there.
>>It was just as well that I was watching the movie there.
>>It was the perfect time that I was watching the movie there.
These days, My fried and I laugh with that experience.
>>These days, my friend and I laugh about that experience.
But, At that time. It was super frightening.
>>But, at that time, it was super frightening.
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