homework
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HOMEWORK: Do certain colors make you feel happier?
Personally, I like blue color Actually, I don\'t know why am i like this color but, when was young i was been like this color.
And, I have many blue clothes in my closet. blue color makes me calm down, so i like sky blue color too.
I heard about it, green color makes me people more calm down and relax So, almost of Korea school board is green.
It can be also feel comfortable and we can more concentrate the lesson than other color.
Same reason, When we watched the surgery room, they wearing a green color.
We have to find what color make us more happier.
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Personally, I like blue color Actually, I don\'t know why am i like this color but, when was young i was been like this color.
>>Personally, actually I like the blue color , I don\'t know why I like this color but, since I was young I like this color.
>>And, I have many blue clothes in my closet. Blue color makes me calm, so I like sky blue too.
I heard about it, green color makes me people more calm down and relax So, almost of Korea school board is green.
>>I heard about it, green color makes people more calm and relaxed. Almost all of Korean schools board are green.
It can be also feel comfortable and we can more concentrate the lesson than other color.
>>It can also make you feel comfortable and we can concentrate more on the lesson compared to other colors.
Same reason, When we watched the surgery room, they wearing a green color.
>>For the same reason, When we watch the surgery room, they are wearing green.
We have to find what color make us more happier.
>>We have to find what color makes us happier.
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