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2019-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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I think we’re able to everything that we think in the future. We can know When I watch Nexflix ‘Black mirrow’ serise. If We can push the button, we can go anywhere. If you want to see something, we can see everything, Also we might be take a medicine instead of meal. And I’ll expact this situation, but It’s scary.

강사 첨삭

Hello Eun Young !!!

Preparing yourself with all the challenges in life is just a trial for you to move forward.

In this way, you will find yourself, knowing that you\'ve learn a lot.\"

T. Jeny

I think we’re able to everything that we think in the future.

>>I think we can do everything that we want in the future.
We can know When I watch Nexflix ‘Black mirrow’ serise.

>>We can know when to watch, Black Mirror series on Netflix.
If We can push the button, we can go anywhere.

>>correct
If you want to see something, we can see everything,

>>correct
Also we might be take a medicine instead of meal.

>>We can also take medicine instead of food.

And I’ll expact this situation, but It’s scary.

>>I expect this to happen but it\'s scary.

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