Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you think are/would be the advantages and disadvantages of being your own boss? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentence
Advantage is that I can decide on someting freely.
I don\'t need to submit the report to approve somthing.
Disadvantage is that I must be responsible for everything.
I feel lonely when I decide on important issue.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Serena. You gave very good points in your composition. I appreciate you sharing your excellent ideas on your composition. Great job and keep it up! ~ teacher Jane ^___^
Advantage is that I can decide on someting freely.
>>> The advantage is that I can decide on something freely.
I don\'t need to submit the report to approve somthing.
>>> I don\'t need to submit the report for approval.
Disadvantage is that I must be responsible for everything.
>>> The disadvantage is that I must be responsible for everything.
I feel lonely when I decide on important issue.
>>> I feel lonely when making decisions on important issues.
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