Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Are certain careers in your country dominated by men or women? If so, why do you think this is? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
I think that members of National assembly are dominated by men in our country.
Especially members of national assembly are majerity of over 50 years old men.
A young women as a member of national assembly quit member of national assembly because of child birth.
That\'s the reason why women are small portion of national assembly members.
Although, we need women national assembly members to represent all womem.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Serena. ^^ Thank you for catching up on your homework. I really appreciate it. I guess it\'s not new anymore that even in politics in Korea, men dominate women. I do hope there would be more women in the Korean National Assembly to speak for all Korean women. Again, thank you and have a good one! ~ teacher Jane c\",)
I think that members of National assembly are dominated by men in our country.
>>> I think that members of the National Assembly are dominated by men in our country.
Especially members of national assembly are majerity of over 50 years old men.
>>> Especially majority of the members of the National Assembly are 50-year-old men.
A young women as a member of national assembly quit member of national assembly because of child birth.
>>> A young woman who was a member of the National Assembly resigned because of pregnancy.
That\'s the reason why women are small portion of national assembly members.
>>> That\'s the reason there are a few women in the National Assembly.
Although, we need women national assembly members to represent all womem.
>>> Although, we need women in the National Assembly to represent all women.
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