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2019-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi Jeny! It’s easy to writer sentence than speak English. lol I try to do my homework everydays. I agree to make automated cars. It’ll sell soon and expect to that. I’m having a driver’s license for a long time. I used few times since that. If it make automated cars, we’ll convenient everything. We might be not need a driver’s license. Maybe we push the button, we can take somewhere automated cars.

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Hello there!

 

Thank you for having the time to do your homework and for sharing your thoughts and your opinion about this matter. :)

I appreciate your efforts and continue to strive for the better! :)

T. Jeny

 


Hi Jeny!

>>correct
 It’s easy to writer sentence than speak English. lol 

>>It’s easy to write a sentence than to speak in English. lol 
 I try to do my homework everydays.
>> I try to do my homework every day. 
I agree to make automated cars.

>>I am in favor of automated cars.

 It’ll sell soon and expect to that.

>>It will be sold soon as expected.

I’m having a driver’s license for a long time.

>>I have a driver’s license for a long time.

I used few times since that.

>>I have used it a few times.

If it make automated cars, we’ll convenient everything.

>>If they will make automated cars, it will be convenient for everybody.

We might be not need a driver’s license.

>>Maybe, we don\'t need a driver\'s license.

Maybe we push the button, we can take somewhere automated cars.

>>We will just push the button and we can go anywhere.

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