Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you agree that pockets are useful? What can we put in them?
Yes, I do. I think that pockets are very useful. If we put stuffs in a bag not in pockets, It will be inconvenient for people to take them out from bag. big things would be okay to keep it in a bag. But, Small things are hard to find in a bag when you keep them in a bag. And we don\'t always carry the bag. especially Men usually go out without the bag.and in perspective of design, Pockets make clothes look pretty.
If there are no pockets in clothes, It would be very simple and would be not pretty.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jay! You are doing great in your homework every day!
Until the next one! ^_^
See you in class!
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
If we put stuffs in a bag not in pockets, It will be inconvenient for people to take them out from bag.
>>If we put stuffs in a bag and not in pockets, it will be inconvenient for people to take them out from the bag.
big things would be okay to keep it in a bag. But, Small things are hard to find in a bag when you keep them in a bag.
>>Big things would be okay to keep in the bag but small things are hard to find in a bag when you keep them in it.
And we don\'t always carry the bag. especially Men usually go out without the bag.
>>And we don\'t always carry a bag especially for men who usually go out without a bag.
and in perspective of design, Pockets make clothes look pretty.
>>And in the perspective of design, pockets make clothes look pretty.
OR>>And in the perspective of fashion, pockets make clothes look pretty.
If there are no pockets in clothes, It would be very simple and would be not pretty.
>>If there are no pockets in clothes, it would be very simple and would not be pretty.
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