homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름]!
I\'m impressed with your knowledge about this kind of stuff. I hope you\'ll know better what to do with your money in the future. :)
~Teacher Lucy
Saving and investing money often are used interchangeably, but there is a difference.
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Saving is setting aside money you don\'t spend now for emergencies and future purchase.
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>>Saving is an allocated fund, not be to spend as for future purposes.
Investing is buying assets such as stocks, bonds,mutual funds or real estate with the expectation that your investment will make money for you.
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>>Investment is purchasing assets that will make money for you.
Most of economics theories are based on the belief that investors all make rational choices.
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Nevertheless, we cannot deny that emotions work as strong as rationality.
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Most people start investing with a purpose that\'s makinly based on emotions, such as greed.
>>Most people start investing with a purpose that\'s mainly based on emotions, such as greed.
I believe it is impossible for human to judge apart from their feelings, because humans are, in fact animals of emotion.
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As a result, the stock market is always unpredictable.
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>>In the market world, stock market fluctuates.
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