homework
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HOMEWORK: Have you ever done meditation? if Yes, please explain, if No, would you like to try it?
Yes i have that experience, When i was elementary school student I was been going to TAKWONDO academy.
TAKWONDO is traditional fight skill in Korea for protected ourselves.
We had a meditation time when lesson began, First, we sit in ground and feel the relax after that, we have to focus our [이름]d.
We had been doing that during 20 [이름]utes all day. When finish the meditation, I feel more better and calm than before.
That feeling is like flying bird, Just closed the eyes and focused.
I really want to recommend the meditation for everyone because It makes you feel more happy.
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Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
TAKWONDO is traditional fight skill in Korea for protected ourselves.
We had a meditation time when lesson began, First, we sit in ground and feel the relax after that, we have to focus our [이름]d.
I really want to recommend the meditation for everyone because It makes you feel more happy.
Yes i have that experience, When i was elementary school student I was been going to TAKWONDO academy.
>>Yes I have that experience, when I was am elementary school student I have been going to a Taekwondo academy.
>>Taekwondo is a traditional fight skill in Korea to protect ourselves.
We had a meditation time when lesson began, First, we sit in ground and feel the relax after that, we have to focus our [이름]d.
>>We began, first, we sit in the ground and relax after that, we have to focus our [이름]d.
We had been doing that during 20 [이름]utes all day. When finish the meditation, I feel more better and calm than before.
>>We have been doing that for 20 [이름]utes all day. When we finish our meditation, I feel better and calmer than before.
That feeling is like flying bird, Just closed the eyes and focused.
>>The feeling is like I\'m a flying bird, I just close my eyes and I\'m focused.
I really want to recommend the meditation for everyone because It makes you feel more happy.
>>I really want to recommend the meditation for everyone because it makes you feel happier.
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