Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course. I think there is no border between what women have to do at home and what men have to do at home.
If women is busy, Men have to do family affairs. The thought that only women work at home is outdated. I think Women and Men are equivalent when it comes to family affairs. So It will not depends on what genders they have but on who has a time to do that affair.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Jay! Indeed you are right. It does not depend on the gender especially for today\'s generation. Thank you for being honest when it comes to these issues. Great job!
Until the next one!
See you in class~ ^_^
~Teacher Sheila :)
>>CORRECT
OR>>Of course, I think there is no border between what women can do at home and what men can do at home.
If women is busy, Men have to do family affairs.
>>If women are busy, men have to do family affairs.
The thought that only women work at home is outdated.
>>CORRECT
I think Women and Men are equivalent when it comes to family affairs.
>>I think women and men are equal when it comes to family affairs.
So It will not depends on what genders they have but on who has a time to do that affair.
>>So, it will not depend on what genders they have but it\'s about who has the time to do that affair.
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