homework
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There are natural disasters such as hurricane, tornadoes, earthquake, or tsunami.
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>>Natural disasters are hurricane, tornadoes, earthquake and tsunami.
These happen because of the weather or other natural disasters.
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There has been natural disasters since the start of the Earth.
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>>Since the start of the Earth, there has been natural disasters.
However, natural disasters are happening more frequently these days, and scientists believe it is caused by human.
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In 1970, there were only 78, but that number has risen to over 348 in 2004.
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>>In 1970, there were only 78, but it was tripled in2004 to 348.
Most of the increase in on \'hydro-meteorological\' disasters.
>>Most of the increase is on \'hydro-meteorological\' disasters.
In 1980, there were about 100 disasters reported per year, and the number has risen to over 300 a year since 2000.
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>>There were 100 disasters reposted in 1980 and the number increased in 2000 to 300.
In contrast, natural geologic disasters, such as volcanic eruptions, earthquakes, landslides and avalanches have remained steady in recent decades.
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In contrast, the number of geology disasters such as volcanoes, earthquakes remained the same.
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>>In addition, the number of geology disasters such as volcanoes, earthquakes remained the same.
Scientists believe the increase in hydro-meteorological disasters is due to a combination of natural and made-made factors.
>> Scientists believe the increase in hydro-meteorological disasters is due to a combination of natural and man-made factors.
Global warming is increasing the temperatures of the Earth.
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