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HOMEWORK: What is the \"fight or flight\" response? and How does it relate to stress?
When i fight to someone, It means that I feel very stressful because stress cause lot of anger.
Stress always followed people every times, So we have to adapted these stress.
We lives with stress together, So, It is not only remove the stress but also live together very harmony.
These stress divided three kinds of stress, First is physiological reaction and second is mental reaction and third is action reaction.
There have lot of ways how to decrease stress, So, We have to decrease these stress very slowly.
If we had hurried, stress is more the bigger than before.
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Stress always followed people every times, So we have to adapted these stress.
We lives with stress together, So, It is not only remove the stress but also live together very harmony.
These stress divided three kinds of stress, First is physiological reaction and second is mental reaction and third is action reaction.
There have lot of ways how to decrease stress, So, We have to decrease these stress very slowly.
If we had hurried, stress is more the bigger than before.
When i fight to someone, It means that I feel very stressful because stress cause lot of anger.
>>When I fight someone, it means that I feel very stressful, because stress can cause a lot of anger.
>>Stress always follow people every time, so we have to adapt to these kinds stress.
We lives with stress together, So, It is not only remove the stress but also live together very harmony.
>>We live with stress altogether, so it is not to remove stress only, but also to live together in harmony.
These stress divided three kinds of stress, First is physiological reaction and second is mental reaction and third is action reaction.
>>These kinds of stress are divided into three kinds of stress, first is the physiological reaction and the second is the mental reaction and third is action reaction.
There have lot of ways how to decrease stress, So, We have to decrease these stress very slowly.
>>There are a lot of ways on how to decrease stress, so we have to decrease these kinds of stress very slowly.
If we had hurried, stress is more the bigger than before.
>>If we make haste, our stress can grow bigger ever than before.
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