Homework

Hello Jimmy!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

If I take it deep, it can be an amazingly deep question. 

>> If I take it deeply, it can be an amazingly deep question.

So I might have to elaborate goals similar to the bucket list. 

>> So I might have to elaborate the goals that is similar to the bucket list.

I want to buy an apartment over 150 square meter in gangnam area before I turn 50. 

>> I want to buy an apartment, that is over 150 square meter and is located in Gangnam area, before I turn 50.

And I want to run my own business someday with a great success.

>> I also want to run my own business with great success someday.