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The Division of Korea began at the end of World War II in 1945.
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>>At the end of World War II in 1945, the division of Korea began.
With the declaration of the Soviet-Japanese War, the Soviet Union occupied the north of Korea, and the United States occupied the south, with the boundary between their zones being the 38th parallel.
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With the onset of the Cold War, negotiations between the United States and the Soviet Union failed to lead to an independent and unified Korean state.
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>>Negotiations between the United States and Soviet Union failed to lead an independent and unified Korean state.
In 1948, after both North and South had purged their dissidents, UN-supervised elections were held in the US-occupied south only.
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The American-backed Syngman Rhee won the election while Kim Il-sung was appointed as the leader of North Korea.
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>>Kim Il-sung was appointed as the leader of North Korea while the American-backed Syngman Rhee won the election.
This led to the establishment of the Republic of Korea in South Korea, which was promptly followed by the establishment of the Democratic People\'s Republic of Korea in North Korea.
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The United States supported the South, the Soviet Union supported the North, and each government claimed sovereignty over the whole Korean peninsula.
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>>Each government claimed sovereignty over the whole Korean peninsula, wherein, the United States supported the South, the Soviet Union supported the North
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