Homework
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If you are buying an expensive item, do you compare prices at several shops and the internet? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Of course. If I buy the more expensive one, I compare prices for a long time.
First, I visit several shops to check the products and compare prices.
Second, I compare the prices at several shops and the internet.
Third, I purchase the products at the most resonalble price.
Normally, the price in the internet is the cheapest.
Last time, we purchased both washer and drier following the process I commented above.
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Hey, Serena. I was very interested to know the process you follow in shopping. Thank you for sharing tips on shopping. Have a good one~ teacher Jane ^^
Of course. If I buy the more expensive one, I compare prices for a long time.
>>> Of course, if I buy expensive items, I compare prices and think about it for a long time.
First, I visit several shops to check the products and compare prices.
>>> CORRECT =)
Second, I compare the prices at several shops and the internet.
>>> CORRECT =)
Third, I purchase the products at the most resonalble price.
>>> Third, I purchase the products at the most reasonable price.
Normally, the price in the internet is the cheapest.
>>> Normally, the price on the internet is the cheapest.
OR>>> >>> Usually, the price on the internet is the cheapest.
Last time, we purchased both washer and drier following the process I commented above.
>>> Recently, we purchased both a washer and a drier following the process I mentioned above.
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