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2019-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Oneil

학생이 쓴 원문

When i know pass the exam, i am so happy. It\'s because i prepare this exam 1year. So my family and i had a party after passed exam. I want to go middle school quickly.

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Thank you [이름]! 

When i know pass the exam, i am so happy.
>> When I found out that I passed the exam, I was so happy!

It\'s because i prepare this exam 1year.
>> It is because I prepared for the exam for 1 year.

So my family and i had a party after passed exam.
>> So, my family had a party after passing the exam. 

I want to go middle school quickly.
>> I want to go to middle school quickly.

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