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2019-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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What do you think is interesting about your culture? There are plenty of supernatural shaman-like cultures in Korea like many other countries in Asia. For example, in the morning of korean Thanksgiving day, people bow in front of a table with traditional foods on it. There is nobody there but people say that their ancestors are there with them, although they don\'t see them. In linguistic perspective, we say \"did you eat breakfast/lunch/dinner?\" as a greeting. I guess this could be a greeting when we were not sufficiently eating because of poverty.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jimmy!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

There are plenty of supernatural shaman-like cultures in Korea like many other countries in Asia. 

>> There are plenty of supernatural shaman-like cultures in Korea like what is practiced in many other countries in Asia. 

For example, in the morning of korean Thanksgiving day, people bow in front of a table with traditional foods on it. 

>> For example, in the morning of Korean Thanksgiving Day, people bow in front of a table that has traditional foods on it. 

There is nobody there but people say that their ancestors are there with them, although they don\'t see them.

>> There is nobody there but people say that their ancestors are there with them, even though they don\'t see them.
In linguistic perspective, we say \"did you eat breakfast/lunch/dinner?\" as a greeting. 

>> In a linguistic perspective, we say \"did you eat breakfast/lunch/dinner?\" as a greeting. 

I guess this could be a greeting when we were not sufficiently eating because of poverty.

>> I guess this could be a greeting if we were not eating sufficiently because of poverty.

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