Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Jimmy!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
There are plenty of supernatural shaman-like cultures in Korea like many other countries in Asia.
>> There are plenty of supernatural shaman-like cultures in Korea like what is practiced in many other countries in Asia.
For example, in the morning of korean Thanksgiving day, people bow in front of a table with traditional foods on it.
>> For example, in the morning of Korean Thanksgiving Day, people bow in front of a table that has traditional foods on it.
There is nobody there but people say that their ancestors are there with them, although they don\'t see them.
>> There is nobody there but people say that their ancestors are there with them, even though they don\'t see them.
In linguistic perspective, we say \"did you eat breakfast/lunch/dinner?\" as a greeting.
>> In a linguistic perspective, we say \"did you eat breakfast/lunch/dinner?\" as a greeting.
I guess this could be a greeting when we were not sufficiently eating because of poverty.
>> I guess this could be a greeting if we were not eating sufficiently because of poverty.
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