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2019-11-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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My first job was in twenty-two. I wanted to do movie marketing. So I entired company name is ‘Vidan’. This company was famous in same industry. I had to went to work early and got off work lately because of junior. But I didn’t sad and hard. I really wanted do. So I grow up every way. And I can be here. I think sometime about that and Miss my co-works.

강사 첨삭


Hello Eun Young!!!!

Remember that learning English requires action. One small action is more powerful than reading hundreds of articles. Yes, we know it is very hard to do things, even if they are good for us. We humans are lazy creatures. That is why not many people speak English well.

You can do it in a fun and effective way.

Smile!!!

~~~T. Jeny~~~


My first job was in twenty-two.

>>I was twenty-two when I had my first job.

I wanted to do movie marketing.

>>correct
So I entired company name is ‘Vidan’.

>>So I entered the company name is ‘Vidan’.

 This company was famous in same industry.

>>This company was famous in the same industry.
 I had to went to work early and got off work lately because of junior.

>>I had to work early and end work late because I was a junior staff.
But I didn’t sad and hard. I really wanted do.

>>But I wasn\'t sad and it wasn\'t difficult because I really wanted to do the job.
So I grow up every way.

>>So I grew up every day.

And I can be here.

>>that\'s why I am here now.
I think sometime about that and Miss my co-works.

>>Sometimes, I think about that and I miss my co-workers.

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