Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
There are too many people in the city.Many countryside people comes to the city. Because it is very hard for them to live out in countryside. By activating international trade, Korea has imported too many crops from other country to get them cheaper. So, There are too many vegetables and rices which are not from Korea. So, I think government support these people farming. We need to diffuse city people to countryside.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jay! You are somewhat right however it still depends on the people.
Until the next one!
See you in class! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
Many countryside people comes to the city.
>>Many people from the countrysides come to the city.
Because it is very hard for them to live out in countryside.
>>Because it is very hard for them to live in the countryside.
By activating international trade, Korea has imported too many crops from other country to get them cheaper.
>>By activating international trade, Korea has imported too many crops from other countries to get them cheaper.
So, There are too many vegetables and rices which are not from Korea.
>>So, there are too many vegetables and rice which are not from Korea.
So, I think government support these people farming.
>>So, I think the government supports these people who are farming.
We need to diffuse city people to countryside.
>>We need to disseminate people from the city to the countryside.
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