Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Please answer any of the following questions below:
1. Have you ever bought a luxury item?
I\'ve bought a luxury item.
2. Are there certain luxury goods that you consider essential and others you’d consider unnecessary?
I think we need luxury goods with good function. But I think luxury goods are unnecessary to show them to others.
3. In period of economic crisis, do you think that luxury brands suffer the same drop in sales as brands in general?
Sales of luxury goods will likely decrease sales by the general public during the economic crisis, but there will likely be no significant sales decline due to consumption by the upper class.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Teacher Lucy
I\'ve bought a luxury item.
>>CORRECT!
I think we need luxury goods with good function.
>>CORRECT!
>>I think we need luxury goods that are durable.
But I think luxury goods are unnecessary to show them to others.
>>CORRECT!
>>Moreover, it\'s unnecessary to showcase luxury items to others.
Sales of luxury goods will likely decrease sales by the general public during the economic crisis, but there will likely be no significant sales decline due to consumption by the upper class.
>>CORRECT!
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