Homework.
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In my weekend i went to First-birthday party.
This party is in seoul.
Me and my father are so tired.
It\'s because seoul is so far to my house.
But this party is really fun.
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Thank you [이름].
>> Last weekend, I went to the first-birthday party of my neighbor.
This party is in seoul.
>> This party is in Seoul.
Me and my father are so tired.
>> My father and I were so tired.
It\'s because seoul is so far to my house.
>> It\'s because, Seoul is so far from my house.
But this party is really fun.
>> This party is really fun though.
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