homework
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The most luxury item I have bought is a smartphone.
>>CORRECT!
>>Smartphone is the most luxury item I bought.
I think a smartphone is essential especially nowadays, because it is a device necessary to communicate with other people.
>>I think a smartphone is essential especially nowadays, because it is a necessary device to communicate with other people.
On the other hand, I consider luxury things such as bags and watches are unnecessary.
>>CORRECT!
>>I consider bags and watches as luxury items that are unnecessary.
They are no different fro normal bags and watches, but because of luxury brands, I think in period of economic crusus, luxury brands will suffer the samedrop in sales.
>>There is no difference for normal bags and watches, but because of luxury brands, I think in period of economic crisis, luxury brands will suffer the samedrop in sales.
In economic crisis, people won\'t have enough money to buy luxury things often, which will lead to suffering the same drop as brands in general.
>>CORRECT!
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