Homework

Hello Jimmy!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think that luck definitely have contribution in winning. 

>> I think that luck definitely has a contribution in winning.

Edison, the greatest inventor, says that success is made from 99% of effort, but I think he was lucky to have their parents who supported him even if he was evaluated to be a dumb and weird boy. 

>> Edison, one of the greatest inventor, said that success is made of 99% effort, but I think he was just lucky to have his parents who supported him even if he was evaluated as a dumb and weird boy.

In addition, he was lucky to have sponsorship for his study. 

>> In addition, he was also lucky to have received sponsorship for his study.

In case of Vincent van Gogh, he was a true genius and painted plenty of masterpieces, but he was not successful with his artworks in his life. 

>> While in  the case of Vincent van Gogh, he was a true genius and painted plenty of masterpieces, but he was not successful with his artworks in his time.

I think that the only reason for his case is the fact that he was not lucky.

>> I think that the only reason why that was the case for him is the fact that he was not lucky.