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I prefer to live for the rest of my life in the city. If i live in the countryside, it would be very boring. There are no friends, no conveniences.
and It would be very lonely. And if i get a job, I would be working in the city. So,.To live in city is essentiel.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Jay! I feel the same as you. Spending is good as well as bad thing. :D
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila :)
>>CORRECT
If i live in the countryside, it would be very boring.
>>If I live in the countryside, it would be very boring.
There are no friends, no conveniences. and It would be very lonely.
>>There are no friends, no conveniences and it would be very lonely.
And if i get a job, I would be working in the city.
>>And, if I get a job, I would be working in the city.
So,.To live in city is essentiel.
>>So, to live in the city is essential.
OR>>So, living in the city is essential.
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