Homework

Do you like traveling? Why or why not? I like traveling somewhere I have never been to. It would be better if it is overseas. I am a kind of person who easily cloys about something which is already experienced. However, I don\'t prefer to visit to the place which is crowded by travelers who have same nationality. I might not get the feeling of their culture and I will get confused where I am. I mean I would feel I am at Korea when I see lots of Koreans there. When I get to new place, I avoid having a food which I can easily eat in my area. And sometimes my challenges making me be happy owing to bring something delicious to me. Furthermore, I like to journey with a person since I may know about him more while we are having hard time during travel. We can share our life stories, experiences, and I might find his merit which I would like to resemble. If I visit some of good place, I will see what makes it to be good and find some item what I have to do in my future.

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Do you like traveling? Why or why not?

I like traveling somewhere I have never been to.

CORRECT!

or>>I enjoy going on a trip to a place where I have never visited before.

It would be better if it is overseas.

CORRECT!

or>>It is even more preferable if it is outside the country.

I am a kind of person who easily cloys about something which is already experienced.

>>I am the kind of person who is easily sickened with something I have already experienced.

However, I don\'t prefer to visit to the place which is crowded by travelers who have same nationality.

>>However, I don\'t prefer visiting a place where it is crowded by travelers who have the same nationality as mine.

I might not get the feeling of their culture and I will get confused where I am.

>>I might not get the feel of the culture and I will get confused where I am.

I mean I would feel I am at Korea when I see lots of Koreans there.

>>I mean, I would feel that I am in Korea when I see lots of Koreans there.

When I get to new place, I avoid having a food which I can easily eat in my area.

>>When I get to a new place, I avoid having some food which I can easily eat in my area.

And sometimes my challenges making me be happy owing to bring something delicious to me.

>>And sometimes, these challenges make me be happy, owing to the fact that I am bringing something delicious with me.

Furthermore, I like to journey with a person since I may know about him more while we are having hard time during travel.

>>Furthermore, I like to go on a journey with another person, since I may get to know more about him while we encounter some hard times during our travel.

We can share our life stories, experiences, and I might find his merit which I would like to resemble.

>>We can share our life stories and experiences, which might help me discover some of his merits that I could emulate.

If I visit some of good place, I will see what makes it to be good and find some item what I have to do in my future.

>>If I visit some good places, I will be able to find out why it is that way, and I may come across some things that I can do in the future.