Homework.
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First of all, I would like to stress the true that there is no perfect person who are clear in regard to moral thing. As a human, everyone has ever commit a crime at least over one time in their lifetime. However, citizens expect politicians to live like Jesus. I have a similar opinion, but politicians are also human. How come they haven\'t commit bad things. Actually, I don\'t know what is the justice. We are living under the law that are created by people. It differs by countries. Some people try to keep their law but they do illegal things within their laws.
In regard to family problem, I think politicians do something in the matter their family involved. Family is not the politician itself, but they are the closest relationship. So, if family members commit illegal things, politicians should resign from their position.
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Homework:
First of all, I would like to stress the true that there is no perfect person who are clear in regard to moral thing.
>>> First of all, I would like to stress the truth that every human being is not perfect therefore, no one is clean in regard to their moral.
As a human, everyone has ever commit a crime at least over one time in their lifetime.
>>> As a human being, all of us has committed a crime at least once in our life time. We all did something bad.
However, citizens expect politicians to live like Jesus. I have a similar opinion, but politicians are also human.
>>> CORRECT
OR: Ironically, people expects politicians to live like Jesus. I have a similar opinion, but politicians are also human, they are not perfect too.
How come they haven\'t commit bad things.
>>> CORRECT
Actually, I don\'t know what is the justice.
>>> Actually, I don\'t know what is the real meaning of justice.
We are living under the law that are created by people.
>>> We are living under the law created by the people.
It differs by countries. Some people try to keep their law but they do illegal things within their laws.
>>> It differs in each country. Some people try to keep their laws but they still do illegal things within their laws.
In regard to family problem, I think politicians do something in the matter their family involved.
>>> In regards to family problems, I think politicians will do something in such situations where their family is involved.
Family is not the politician itself, but they are the closest relationship.
>>> Their family members are not the politician himself; they maybe related by blood but they are not fully in control of the member of their family. They are not accountable for a mistake done by a family member.
So, if family members commit illegal things, politicians should resign from their position.
>>> So, if a family member commits an illegal act or crime, then politician should resign from their position right way.
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