Homework
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Writing Task: What are the advantages and disadvantages of learning English? Make a short essay about this
There are many advantages of learning English. For me, Ability to speak English is important for my future career. I will work in an airplane, and English is international language. So, Companies will employ staffs who can speak English well. And To learn foreign languages is very fun. I like pop songs and When i realized that i\'m understanding songs, it was very proud of myself. I think there are no disadvantages of learning English. If i have to find one, i may confuse with my own language. But, This doesn\'t also make sense.
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강사 첨삭
Hi there Jay! You know how to organized your ideas well when it come to writing.
Until the next one!
See you in our class! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila
There are many advantages of learning English.
>>CORRECT
For me, Ability to speak English is important for my future career.
>>For me, having the ability to speak English is important for my future career.
I will work in an airplane, and English is international language.
>>I will work in an airplane and English is the international language.
So, Companies will employ staffs who can speak English well.
>>So, companies will employ staffs who can speak English very well.
And To learn foreign languages is very fun.
>>And, to learn a foreign language is very fun.
OR>>And learning a foreign language is very fun.
I like pop songs and When i realized that i\'m understanding songs, it was very proud of myself.
>>I like pop songs and when I realized that I\'m understanding songs, I was very proud of myself.
I think there are no disadvantages of learning English.
>>CORRECT
If i have to find one, i may confuse with my own language.
>>If I have to find one, I get confused with my own language.
But, This doesn\'t also make sense.
>>But, this doesn\'t also make sense.
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