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I would like to tell you about that the moment when i got accepted into university. Because some people say that \"it is hard for you to going into the pukung university\".
Because, My high school score was less than cut line to applying. So, I struggle to getting acception from interviewer. and then, I can study in the pukung university finally. At the moment that i knew good news, My parents were really happy about that and me too. That\'s why i told you the moment.
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Thank you for sharing this to me. ^_^
I would like to tell you about that the moment when i got accepted into university. Because some people say that \"it is hard for you to going into the pukung university\".
>> I would like to tell you about that the moment when I got accepted into a university. It is because, some people told me, \"It is hard for you to enter Pukung University\".
Because, My high school score was less than cut line to applying.
>> This is because my high school score was less than the required score.
So, I struggle to getting acception from interviewer. and then, I can study in the pukung university finally.
>> So, I struggled to get accepted from my interviewer. After that, I was finally accepted in the University.
At the moment that i knew good news, My parents were really happy about that and me too.
>> When I received the good news, my parents and I were really happy.
That\'s why i told you the moment.
>> That\'s why this is what I shared today.
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