HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Have you ever bought or would you ever buy what you thought was a \"luxury\" good? Why/why not? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Yes. When I married with my husband, I bought GUCCI bag at duty free shop because I want to have luxury branded bag.
It\'s not easy to pass at Phillipine airport and Korean airport, because the price of bag is expensive.
My husband asked why I need the bag and I answered that I\'ll use the bag untill I become a grandmohter.
Anyway, I got the GUCCI bag. I bring the bag whenever I go to company for almost 5 years.
But, the bag start to tear. It is very expensive but the bag is not strong.
In the end, I throw it away and I bought new bag which is cheap and with good quality.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Serena. Thank you for doing this homework. I had a good time reading it. I suppose there are designer handbags that can last until you become a grandmother ^^ If you find one, tell me and I\'ll try to buy one as well. Anyway, good job and I look forward to the next one. ~ teacher Jane c\",)
Yes. When I married with my husband, I bought GUCCI bag at duty free shop because I want to have luxury branded bag.
>>> Yes, when I got married, I bought a GUCCI bag at a duty-free shop because I wanted to have a luxury branded bag.
It\'s not easy to pass at Phillipine airport and Korean airport, because the price of bag is expensive.
>>> It\'s not easy to pass at the Philippine airport and Korean airport because the price of the bag is expensive.
My husband asked why I need the bag and I answered that I\'ll use the bag untill I become a grandmohter.
>>> My husband asked why I needed the bag and I answered that I\'ll use the bag until I become a grandmother.
Anyway, I got the GUCCI bag.
>>> CORRECT =)
I bring the bag whenever I go to company for almost 5 years.
>>> I brought the bag whenever I went to work for almost 5 years.
But the bag start to tear.
>>> But the bag started to tear.
It is very expensive but the bag is not strong.
>>> It is very expensive but the bag is not that strong/ sturdy/ durable.
In the end, I throw it away and I bought new bag which is cheap and with good quality.
>>> In the end, I threw it away and I bought a new bag which is cheap and with good quality.
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