Homework

Hello Jimmy!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Value of change depends on the subject. 

>> The value of change depends on the subject. 

Sometimes you have to stay still when you are doing great, but sometimes you have to change things from the bottom. 

>> Sometimes you have to stay still when you are already doing great, but sometimes, you have to change things from the start. 

Anyways, a change might be a chance to make things right. 

>> Anyway, a change might be a chance to make things right. 

What we have to remember is that the result of change is always positive regardless of success and failure because if you did not change anything there is no progress or one step forward.

>> What we have to remember is that the result of change should always be positive regardless of the success and failure of that change, because if you do not change anything, there will be no progress or any step forward.