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in a five years, i will become to working on the some company where is pretty good company in the canada. and i got a deploma about studying for mechanical engineering from the Centennial College. also, i will be cured for my disc in the back. so i can do that i want to exercise some sports such as fitness and so on. And then, i will done adapting to toronto life, i will really enjoy my toronto life.
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in a five years, i will become to working on the some company where is pretty good company in the canada.
>> In five years, I will be working in a pretty good company in Canada.
and i got a deploma about studying for mechanical engineering from the Centennial College.
>> And I will have a diploma for studying Mechanical Engineering from the Centennial College.
also, i will be cured for my disc in the back.
>> Also, the problem I have on my back will be cured.
so i can do that i want to exercise some sports such as fitness and so on.
>> That is in order to be able to exercise , play sports and so on.
And then, i will done adapting to toronto life, i will really enjoy my toronto life.
>> And, I might have adapted to the life in Toronto. I will enjoy my life their so much.
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