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2019-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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What do you think about aliens? When I am thinking about aliens, shape of three things are pop-up in my head. The first one is a kind of animal or insect which is black color having long head, acid blood, and a skin looks like armor. I have seen it in the movie and it gave me strong impression. I think the other people also get goose boom when they see that at first. Second is a extra terrestrial who doesn\'t have any hair, big eyes, and big head using UFO. When I was young, there are a lot of storied regarding that tribe on the TV and some people make a religion for praying something for them. But I don\'t think there is a kind of people who just observe our planet. Third is a human who lives in the other galaxy that we have never gotten. They totally look same as us and they do not be reached to our planet because there is black hole which people can not enter and too far. So I guess that people can get there when they are free from their body. I mean after death.

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Teacher ELLY.

Homework

What do you think about aliens?

When I am thinking about aliens, shape of three things are pop-up in my head.

>>When I am thinking about aliens, three kinds of shapes start popping up in my head.

The first one is a kind of animal or insect which is black color having long head, acid blood, and a skin looks like armor.

>>The first one is a kind of an animal or an insect, which has a black color with a long head, an acid looking blood, and a skin that looks like an armor.

I have seen it in the movie and it gave me strong impression.

>>I have seen it in a movie and it made a strong impression on me.

I think the other people also get goose boom when they see that at first.

>>I think the other people also got goosebumps when they saw it at first.

Second is a extra terrestrial who doesn\'t have any hair, big eyes, and big head using UFO.

>>The second is an extraterrestrial who doesn\'t have any hair, but it has big eyes and a big head on a UFO.

When I was young, there are a lot of storied regarding that tribe on the TV and some people make a religion for praying something for them.

>>When I was young, there were a lot of stories regarding these different tribes on TV and some people were making it into a religion and they’re starting to pray to them.

But I don\'t think there is a kind of people who just observe our planet.

>>But I don\'t think there are really these kinds of people who are just observing our planet.

Third is a human who lives in the other galaxy that we have never gotten.

>>The third are about humans living in another galaxy, whom we have never reached or come into contact with before.

They totally look same as us and they do not be reached to our planet because there is black hole which people can not enter and too far.

>>They look totally the same as us and they cannot reach our planet because there is a black hole which people cannot enter and it is too far.

So I guess that people can get there when they are free from their body.

>>So, I guess, these people can go through it only when they are separated from their bodies.

I mean after death.

>>I meant, after death.

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