Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are some disadvantages to living in the countryside?
First, It would be very boring. There are no conveniences. It is limited a lot to what i can do. and there would not be my friends or families. I want to drink liquor with people who i love in free time. But, If i live in the countryside, It would be very hard to do it.
And traffic is very inconvenient. There are no subway, bus, airport. Although it has, It\'s very limited. Maybe, Inconvenience is the biggest problem if i live in the countryside.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Jay! You were great in speaking your mind through writing. I can imagine you telling me these sentences.
Enjoy your vacation with your family and friends.
See you next time! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila
>>First, it would be very boring.
There are no conveniences.
>>CORRECT
OR>>There are no modern conveniences.
It is limited a lot to what i can do. and there would not be my friends or families.
>>It limits a lot of what I can do and there would not be my friends or families.
OR>>The things I can do is limited and my family and friends would not be there.
I want to drink liquor with people who i love in free time.
>>I want to drink liquor with the people who I love in my free time.
But, If i live in the countryside, It would be very hard to do it.
>>But, if I live in the countryside, it would be very hard to do it.
And traffic is very inconvenient.
>>And, traffic is very inconvenient.
There are no subway, bus, airport.
>>There are no subways, buses and airports.
Although it has, It\'s very limited.
>>Even if it has, it\'s very limited.
Maybe, Inconvenience is the biggest problem if i live in the countryside.
>>Maybe, inconvenience is the biggest problem if I live in the countryside.
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