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2019-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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I want to be good at playing badminton. Because badminton is the most my favorite sports. And many people like playing badminton. I joined badminton club in my school. I play badminton three times a week. During the vacation, I want to play badminton better so I take lessons.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ellen! Thanks for spending a little of your time with your homework. I appreciate the effort!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one. While you are young do all the things that interests you but make sure you become really good at it! ^^

-Teacher Jedah

I want to be good at playing badminton.

>>CORRECT
Because badminton is the most my favorite sports.

>>Badminton is my most favorite sports.
And many people like playing badminton.

>>CORRECT
I joined badminton club in my school.

>>I joined the badminton club in my school.
I play badminton three times a week.

>>CORRECT
During the vacation, I want to play badminton better so I take lessons.

>>During vacation, I want to play badminton better so I take lessons.

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