Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Halloween Festival in my school.
Last weekend in my school, we did Halloween festival.
Me and my friends prepared show.
After prepared we watched our school students
performance.
It is very fun.
강사 첨삭
Halloween Festival in my school.
Last weekend in my school, we did Halloween festival.
Me and my friends prepared show.
After prepared we watched our school students performance.
It is very fun.
>> There is a Halloween Festival in my school.
Last weekend in my school, we did Halloween festival.
>> Last weekend, we had a Halloween festival.
Me and my friends prepared show.
>> My friends and I prepared for the show.
After prepared we watched our school students performance.
>> After the preparation, we watched other students performance.
It is very fun.
>> Correct.
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