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2019-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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How do you feel when someone disagrees with everything you have to say? There are some topics that we cannot say who is right and who is wrong, such as politics, economics, social issues, religion, etc. In case of those topics, I would not avoid the argument but I normally let them know that you could be right and i could be right, too. However, if these disagreements are habitually repeats, I usually give up on him or her because I am not patient enough to listen to the disagreements and let him or her change.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jimmy!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

There are some topics that we cannot say who is right and who is wrong, such as politics, economics, social issues, religion, etc. 

>> There are some topics where we cannot say who is right and who is wrong, such as politics, economics, social issues, religion, etc. 

In case of those topics, I would not avoid the argument but I normally let them know that you could be right and i could be right, too. 

>> In the case of these topics being brought up, I would not avoid the argument but I would normally let them know that their opinions could be right and my opinions could be right too. 

However, if these disagreements are habitually repeats, I usually give up on him or her because I am not patient enough to listen to the disagreements and let him or her change.

>> However, if these arguments are habitually repeated, I would usually give up on him or her because I am not patient enough to listen to their arguments and wait for them to change.

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