Homework
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강사 첨삭
Hello Jimmy!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
There are some topics that we cannot say who is right and who is wrong, such as politics, economics, social issues, religion, etc.
>> There are some topics where we cannot say who is right and who is wrong, such as politics, economics, social issues, religion, etc.
In case of those topics, I would not avoid the argument but I normally let them know that you could be right and i could be right, too.
>> In the case of these topics being brought up, I would not avoid the argument but I would normally let them know that their opinions could be right and my opinions could be right too.
However, if these disagreements are habitually repeats, I usually give up on him or her because I am not patient enough to listen to the disagreements and let him or her change.
>> However, if these arguments are habitually repeated, I would usually give up on him or her because I am not patient enough to listen to their arguments and wait for them to change.
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