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2019-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Yesterday I had a really bad day. I was woke up at 9 o\'clock because I forgot to set my alarm clock the night before. I got up as fast as I could and I put on some clothes. I ran into the kitchen and made myself a cup of coffee. Then I drank the coffee very fast and I run to my car. It was a terrible morning!

강사 첨삭

Hello Eun Young,

I\'m so sad to hear what happened to you, yesterday. Bu I hope you\'ll have wonderful day today.

There is value in allowing yourself to learn, even if the task is not accomplished as quickly, efficiently or effectively as you expected. You can get things done if you do have the courage to do so, but most importantly, you should allow yourself to learn new things and build your confidence that you can effectively open the door to success.

T. Jeny   


Yesterday I had a really bad day.

>>correct

OR>>Yesterday, I really had a bad day.
 I was woke up at 9 o\'clock because I forgot to set my alarm clock the night before.

>>I woke up at 9 o\'clock because I forgot to set my alarm clock the night before.
I got up as fast as I could and I put on some clothes.

>>correct
 I ran into the kitchen and made myself a cup of coffee.

>>correct

Then I drank the coffee very fast and I run to my car.

>>Then I drank the coffee very fast and I run into my car.

 It was a terrible morning!

>>correct

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