HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the pros and cons of using public transport? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
The pros is that the fee is cheaper than using private car, free to the traffic jam.
Also we can do sometinging during using public transport.
For example, we can read a book, or use smart phone.
The cons is that we need a manner for others.
And we can\'t stop the public transport or change the destination.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Serena. Thank you for doing your homework today. I really appreciate it and I understand how it is with public transport. I\'ll talk to you in class tomorrow. ~ teacher Jane c\",)
The pros is that the fee is cheaper than using private car, free to the traffic jam.
>>> The pros is that it is cheaper than using private cars and it\'s free from traffic jam.
Also we can do sometinging during using public transport.
>>> Also, we do something during the commute.
For example, we can read a book, or use smart phone.
>>> For example, we can read a book or use our smartphones.
The cons is that we need a manner for others.
>>> The cons is that we need to give way to others.
And we can\'t stop the public transport or change the destination.
>>> And we cannot stop wherever we want when we use public transport and we cannot change the destination when we want.
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