Homework

What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in an apartment The disadvantage, it\'s about the noise issue between downstair and upstair neighbor. Sometimes, it makes people fight since these can\'t stand even sound of step. It\'s because construction company use cheap materials to save their budget. The phenomenon makes the problem. If they have followed the design well, it would have naver happened. The advantage is safety, enough parking lot, and esay to get to shopping mall. The apartment, nowadays, is designed to make car entering underground only. So that they use ground floor as a park, cafe, swimming pool or something. Even if the outdoor is raining, or snowing, people do not have any problem until they reach their car because all the route is connected underground. Market, shopping mall, health clubs, or something are located ground till third floor. So they do not need to spend time on the road in the car. I think living in apartment is better than not to live

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in an apartment?

The disadvantage, it\'s about the noise issue between downstair and upstair neighbor.

>>The disadvantage would be the noise issue coming from the neighbors both downstairs and upstairs.

Sometimes, it makes people fight since these can\'t stand even sound of step.

>>Sometimes, it makes people fight since they cannot stand even the sound of people’s steps.

It\'s because construction company use cheap materials to save their budget.

>>It\'s because construction companies use cheap materials to save money.

The phenomenon makes the problem.

>>This phenomenon creates a few problems.

If they have followed the design well, it would have never happened.

CORRECT!

or>>It shouldn’t have occurred if they simply followed every detail of the building design.

The advantage is safety, enough parking lot, and esay to get to shopping mall.

>>The advantages are: the safety factor, it has enough parking and it is easy to get to a shopping mall.

The apartment, nowadays, is designed to make car entering underground only.

>>Nowadays, apartment buildings are designed for the cars to park underground only.

So that they use ground floor as a park, cafe, swimming pool or something.

>>So, they the use ground floor as a park, a cafe, and even a swimming pool is built on this floor.

Even if the outdoor is raining, or snowing, people do not have any problem until they reach their car because all the route is connected underground.

>>Even if it is raining or snowing outside, the residents do not have problems until they reach their cars, because all the routes are connected underground.

Market, shopping mall, health clubs, or something are located ground till third floor.

>>The shopping mall and shops, health clubs and other things are located mostly on the ground floor up to the third floor.

So they do not need to spend time on the road in the car.

>>So, they do not need to spend so much time in the car just to be on the road.

I think living in apartment is better than not to live

>>I think living in an apartment is better than not having a place of your own.