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Are you an introvert or an extrovert?
I can\'t define myself whether I\'m an introvert or not.
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or>>It is hard for me whether I consider myself as an introvert or an extrovert.
It\'s depend on the situation, and who is a person with me.
>>It depends on the situation, and on the person who is with me at that moment.
But, I think I\'m more close with an introvert person since I don\'t prefer to tell something in front of more than 3 persons.
>>But, I think I\'m more of an introvert person since I don\'t like telling something about myself to more than 3 persons.
I feel uncomfortable if I am with a person who is not familiar with me because I do not know how to start communicating with the person.
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or>>I feel uncomfortable if I am with someone I’m not familiar with, because I find it hard to strike a conversation with them that easily.
It\'s hard to find the common interest to me.
>>It\'s hard for me to find a common interest with them.
However, people consider me as an extrovert person since I am good at approaching to the people at first with saying hello.
>>However, people consider me as an extrovert since I am good at approaching someone for the first time just to say hello.
It\'s because I always greet to the other people at first even if I do not know him well.
>>It\'s because I always greet people I meet for the first time even if I do not know them that well.
And I prefer finding something new that I have never experienced.
>>And I prefer doing something new which I have never experienced before.
So that I try to go out somewhere when I have free time.
>>So, I always try to go out somewhere when I have free time.
I have no idea I still do know know who I am.
>>I still have no idea who I am really.
So I would like to finish writing this subject since I can\'t explain it even I write it in Korean.
>>So I would like to finish writing this subject since I can\'t explain it even if I do it in Korean.
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