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2019-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Are you an introvert or an extrovert I can\'t define myself whether I\'m an introvert or not. It\'s depend on the situation, and who is a person with me. But, I think I\'m more close with an introvert person since I don\'t prefer to tell something in front of more than 3 persons. I feel uncomfortable if I am with a person who is not familiar with me because I do not know how to start communicating with the person. It\'s hard to find the common interest to me. However, people consider me as an extrovert person since I am good at approaching to the people at first with saying hello. It\'s because I always greet to the other people at first even if I do not know him well. And I prefer finding something new that I have never experienced. So that I try to go out somewhere when I have free time. I have no idea I still do know know who I am. So I would like to finish writing this subject since I can\'t explain it even I write it in Korean.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Thank you for the homework!

Have a great day and see you later!

Teacher ELLY.

Homework

Are you an introvert or an extrovert?

I can\'t define myself whether I\'m an introvert or not.

CORRECT!

or>>It is hard for me whether I consider myself as an introvert or an extrovert.

It\'s depend on the situation, and who is a person with me.

>>It depends on the situation, and on the person who is with me at that moment.

But, I think I\'m more close with an introvert person since I don\'t prefer to tell something in front of more than 3 persons.

>>But, I think I\'m more of an introvert person since I don\'t like telling something about myself to more than 3 persons.

I feel uncomfortable if I am with a person who is not familiar with me because I do not know how to start communicating with the person.

CORRECT!

or>>I feel uncomfortable if I am with someone I’m not familiar with, because I find it hard to strike a conversation with them that easily.

It\'s hard to find the common interest to me.

>>It\'s hard for me to find a common interest with them.

However, people consider me as an extrovert person since I am good at approaching to the people at first with saying hello.

>>However, people consider me as an extrovert since I am good at approaching someone for the first time just to say hello.

It\'s because I always greet to the other people at first even if I do not know him well.

>>It\'s because I always greet people I meet for the first time even if I do not know them that well.

And I prefer finding something new that I have never experienced.

>>And I prefer doing something new which I have never experienced before.

So that I try to go out somewhere when I have free time.

>>So, I always try to go out somewhere when I have free time.

I have no idea I still do know know who I am.

>>I still have no idea who I am really.

So I would like to finish writing this subject since I can\'t explain it even I write it in Korean.

>>So I would like to finish writing this subject since I can\'t explain it even if I do it in Korean.

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