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Hello Eun Young,
It was nice talking with you this morning.
I do believe that you can really improve your skills in English. Continue to have the passion in learning English because I know you can be successful.
Take care.
T. Jeny
I think robots will cause unemployment in the future.
>>correct
However there are advantage and disadvantage.
>>However there are advantages and disadvantages.
For example I always order coffee face to face in Mcdonalds.
>>For example, I always order coffee to a service crew in McDonalds.
But when I went to that someday, I saw the ordering muchine.
>>One day, I went there and I saw an ordering machine.
It was difficult to order first time for me.
>>It was difficult for me to order for the first time.
I can order coffee easily these days.
>>correct
On other way, an employer can save employee cost.
>>On the other hand, an employer can save employee\'s cost.
I think this situation is increased make work in the future.
>>I think, this kind of technology will increase in the future.
Specially people are able to carefully work than robots.
>>But people can work carefully than robots.
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