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2019-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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I think robots will cause unemployment in the future. However there are advantage and disadvantage. For example I always order coffee face to face in Mcdonalds. But when I went to that someday, I saw the ordering muchine. It was difficult to order first time for me. I can order coffee easily these days. On other way, an employer can save employee cost. I think this situation is increased make work in the future. Specially people are able to carefully work than robots.

강사 첨삭

Hello Eun Young,

It was nice talking with you this morning.

I do believe that you can really improve your skills in English. Continue to have the passion in learning English because I know you can be successful.

Take care.

T. Jeny


I think robots will cause unemployment in the future.

>>correct
However there are advantage and disadvantage.

>>However there are advantages and disadvantages.
For example I always order coffee face to face in Mcdonalds.

>>For example, I always order coffee to a service crew in McDonalds.
But when I went to that someday, I saw the ordering muchine.

>>One day, I went there and I saw an ordering machine.

It was difficult to order first time for me.

>>It was difficult for me to order for the first time.

I can order coffee easily these days.

>>correct
On other way, an employer can save employee cost.

>>On the other hand, an employer can save employee\'s cost.

I think this situation is increased make work in the future.

>>I think, this kind of technology will increase in the future.
Specially people are able to carefully work than robots.

>>But people can work carefully than robots.

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