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Do you like meeting new people?
Yes, i like meeting new people. When i was in childhood, i was very introvert. But, Getting older, i become extrovert. So, i usually try to meet many people when i\'m on a holiday. It\'s bad that i can only have that opportunity once a month because i\'m doing compulsory military service. But, i think i have more opportunities than other korean guys who are performing military service.
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Do you like meeting new people?
Yes, i like meeting new people.
>> or: I enjoy meeting new people.
When i was in childhood, i was very introvert. But, Getting older, i become extrovert.
>> When I was a child, I was very introverted, but as I grew older, I became more extroverted.
So, I usually try to meet many people when I\'m on a holiday.
>> correct
It\'s bad that i can only have that opportunity once a month because i\'m doing compulsory military service.
>> It\'s a pity that I can have that opportunity only once a month because I\'m doing my compulsory military service.
But, i think i have more opportunities than other korean guys who are performing military service.
>> However, as I see it, I have more opportunities than other Korean men who are performing theirmilitary service.
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