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I would like to tell you about that what can i do for my friends?
I believe that i can do anything for my friends. because friends is important things in my life. also. for example, my friends ask to me that borrow some money and celebrating for their wedding. I will glad to do it.
however, if he or she ask me to some serious issue such as borrowing excessive money or murder, i can\'t do that definitely. but, i know that he or she will never ask to me like that.
Therefore, i can do anything for my friends generally.
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Can you be my friend then? I want to borrow too. hahaha Just kidding. See you in class. ^_^
I would like to tell you about that what can i do for my friends?
>> I would like to tell you about the things I can do for my friends.
I believe that i can do anything for my friends. because friends is important things in my life. also. for example, my friends ask to me that borrow some money and celebrating for their wedding.I will glad to do it.
>> I believe that I can do anything for my friends because they are important in my life. Also, for example, when my friend borrowed money from me so they can celebrate their wedding day, I gladly agreed.
however, if he or she ask me to some serious issue such as borrowing excessive money or murder, i can\'t do that definitely. but, i know that he or she will never ask to me like that.
>> However, if he or she asks me to commit some serious crime such as borrowing excessive money or murder, I won\'t do that, definitely. I know that he or she will never ask to me those things.
Therefore, i can do anything for my friends generally.
>> Therefore, generally, I can do anything for my friends.
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