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2019-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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what are the happenings in Korea nowadays? There is the most important exam for high school students this Thursday. What universities they can go will be decided by this exam. So, Koreans cheer them to get high scores. I also took the exam 3 years ago. It was the most nervous time from now. I think it is very risky. because where they can go is decided by only one exam. So actually, many students take the exam again next year because it\'s hard for them to satisfy with their scores by only one exam.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework. 



Cheers!
Jean



what are the happenings in Korea nowadays?
There is the most important exam for high school students this Thursday. 
>> or: One of the major happenings in a high school student\'s life is scheduled this Thursday. 

What universities they can go will be decided by this exam.
>> The result of this exam will decide what kind of university they can go. 

So, Koreans cheer them to get high scores.
>> For this reason, Koreans cheer them on to get high marks. 

 I also took the exam 3 years ago. 
>> correct

It was the most nervous time from now.
>> That time was the most nervous I\'ve ever been in my life. 

 I think it is very risky. because where they can go is decided by only one exam. 
>> As I see it, this is too risky because their future is basically decided by only one exam. 

So actually, many students take the exam again next year because it\'s hard for them to satisfy with their scores by only one exam.
>> Consequently, many students retake the exam the following year when they aren\'t satisfied with their scores. 

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