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Would you rather live in the city or a small town? Why or why not?
I had lived in a small town untill 19 years old.
I have live in the seoul city from 20 years to now.
When I was young, I want to live in City, but I am getting older, I like small town more than city.
Because I like natural environment like mountain, tree and flower.
So Last year, we moved our house to calm town in the end of seoul city.
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Good evening, Serena!^^
Thank you for doing your homework. It\'s a good practice to put your thoughts into words to improve your writing and grammar skills. Keep it up! ^_^
I had lived in a small town untill 19 years old.
>>>I lived in a small town until I was 19 years old.
I have live in the seoul city from 20 years to now.
>>> I live in Seoul City for 20 years now.
When I was young, I want to live in City, but I am getting older, I like small town more than city.
>>>When I was young, I wanted to live in a city, but as I\'m getting older, I prefer to live in a small town.
Because I like natural environment like mountain, tree and flower.
>>>Because I like natural environment like mountains, trees and flowers.
OR>> Because I like to be surrounded by nature like mountains, trees and flowers.
So Last year, we moved our house to calm town in the end of seoul city.
>>> So Last year, we moved to another house in a calm town at the boarder of Seoul city.
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